Tuesday, March 17, 2009

The Fight for Bara Magna Part 11

They walked through the desert all that day but couldn’t find a single thornax bush. “The Vorox must be taking them all for there stew,” said Vastus bitterly.
“Probably,” said Gelu.
The light was fading and Mata-Nui stopped walking. “Let’s camp here,” he said. “I will take the first watch.”
The laid there weapons down and Mata-Nui sat on the hot sand. He was thinking about all he had gone through in his world. Ackar was suddenly sitting next to him. “Go to sleep,” said Mata-Nui.
“I can’t sleep,” said Ackar.
“Oh,” said Mata-Nui.
“What really happened to you on your home planet?” asked Ackar.
“Maybe some other time,” said Mata-Nui.
The sun rose and the group began to walk again. Suddenly, Ackar gave a shout of joy and ran ahead. There in front of them was a thornax bush.

7 comments:

  1. How many story parts are left?

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  2. I don't know. I haven't finished writing the whole story yet. Right now I don't think There will be more then 40 or 50. This is a long story because Mata-Nui has to save all of the villages. After this story, I might write another.

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  3. Its 1:41 wheres the next part.

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  4. It's out!!!!! I posted it at like 2:45

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  5. THONAX FRUITS-- --
    Under ripe= green with no spikes+ it is squishy...

    Ripe= the rip thornax is rock hard+ it is the kind that comes with the set.

    Over Ripe= ONLY OVER RIPE FRUITS EXPLODE! most people think all types explode.....>:o

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