Tuesday, March 17, 2009

The Fight for Bara Magna Part 13

“We need to find more Glatorian,” said Mata-Nui.
“How about Calix?” suggested Ackar?
“That myth?” laughed Gelu, “he isn’t even real.
“Who is this, Calix?” asked Mata-Nui.
“He’s a fabled Glatorian. If he’s real, he’s probably very old. They say that he was the best Glatorian ever,” said Vastus.
“We should look for him,” said Mata-Nui.
“Why waste our time with a myth?” said Gelu.
“He may be a myth, he may not be,” said Mata-Nui. “Either way, while searching for him, we may find him and we may find another Glatorian,” said Ackar.
“True,” said Gelu, “but, we won’t find Calix.”
“We’ll try though,” said Mata-Nui. “Where is he supposed to live?”
“In a cave in the desert,” said Ackar.
“Let’s start looking,” said Mata-Nui.
They traveled to Creep Canyon and found a row of large caves. “Let’s search in them,” said Mata-Nui.
He walked into one. Ackar, Vastus, and Gelu walked into another. After walking about ten feet into the cave, Mata-Nui heard a roar. A giant monster swiped him off of his feet and leaned his head down with his giant mouth open.

83 comments:

  1. Can you give me some gymsum or pipe?

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  2. Onewa80 whats your mln user name.

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  3. gresh96: Do you have any gymsum or pipe.

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  4. I don't have any gypsum or pipe. sorry.

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  5. how's your blog coming, xander?

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  6. lol. can you post more comments? i want to get 50 comments on TFFBM part 14. that may seem like alot but its just something i want to happen.

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  7. lol!
    why do you keep saying that.

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  8. Could I help you give ideals for Saving Bara Magna please.

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  9. what ideas do you have for Saving Bara Magna?

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  10. How about Mata nui and friends get attack by fero and his fellow bonehunters.

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  11. Malum is Greg's favorite 2009 character.

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  12. I like your idea but i still haven't thought about this much because it will be like july or august before the first part comes out.

    P.S.
    Remember, Saving Bara Magna is only an idea, I might not actually make it.

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  13. Sorry i haven't answered you xander. I have been shopping like all day. The only good thing that came of it is that I bought METUS!
    YAY!!!!!!!

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  14. start a story xander. please pritty please.

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  15. onewa80,
    How long until btm part 9 comes?

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  16. Can you post another comment on my blog please.

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  17. Before I start the story I need name the Creations first.

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  18. Can you post another comment on my blog please.p.s. MATA NUI!!!!!

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  19. is your story going to have the regular sets in it also?

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  20. hurry up and get those batteries

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  21. only a zesk. p.s. I can't find the AA batteries.

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  22. lol
    did you ask your mom where they are. Also, you should put more then just a zesk in it. it won't seem like bionicle if you only have your creations in it. Also, you should have Corix fight Fero.

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  23. You want to an author on my blog?

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  24. Do i want to be an author on your blog? lol. I can't do that, i'll just give you suggestions. Anyway, you don't have to use all my ideas. It's your blog.

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  25. Thanks, but I also can't help you with your whole story.

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  26. But i think he is part of Mata-Nui's team.

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  27. I gave you an isea on your blog, do you like it?

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  28. Stronius is pretending to be a part of mata nui team.

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  29. thanks to my sister. fero is gone.

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  30. I'm not sure we can say that the shadowy dude was Stronius, but that is a good theory.

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  31. good p.s. thanks to my sister. fero is gone.

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  32. Have you found the batteries yet?

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  33. Are you going to post it today???????

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  34. dude, my dad has my laptop. the file is on there. i can't post the next part for like a week. SORRY!!!!!!!!

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  35. The only way i can post it is if i find my SD Card.

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  36. Thanks for making me an author.

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  37. Are you going to redo tdobm part 1?

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  38. Did you find Fero yet, Xander?

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  39. nope My sister is a good hider

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  40. can you follow my blog at funkeyswild.blogspot.com

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